Un aficionado del Newcastle se despierta de un coma de dos años



¡Un fanático del Newcastle se despierta de un coma de 2 años! El año es 2021 y Newcastle está en peligro de descender de la Premier League. Steve Bruce todavía está a cargo, pero es despedido. Lo que suceda a continuación cambiará el panorama de la Premier League para siempre. Avance rápido casi 2 años hasta 2023 y el Newcastle United se ve muy diferente al de 2021… En este video, un fanático del Newcastle se despierta de un coma de 2 años y se sorprende al descubrir cuán diferente se ve ahora su amado Newcastle. Seguro que te gusta, suscríbete y mira algunos videos más en mi canal. ¡Gracias por ver! SOCIALES: Instagram: TikTok: Suscríbete: Twitter: #newcastleunited #newcastle #football #soccer #premierleague #epl

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24 comentarios en “Un aficionado del Newcastle se despierta de un coma de dos años”

  10. Credible Salamander

    I know you probably won't read this, but I really do think the weakest aspect of these videos is the ending and I think there's a lot you can improve in general. Not the concepts themselves because a lot of it is quite funny but the execution. Instead of leaving off on a strong punchline you sometimes let jokes linger and over explain. Is knowing that the friend is married to the mother any funnier than just knowing he's the dad? Everything discussed after mentioning the dad situation feels like trying to explain how that happened instead of building on the joke, especially when the explanation is so relatively mundane compared to the shock of the initial joke. I personally think it's much funnier to think of an explanation myself and leave things or you can try to subvert our expectations by making the explanation even more bizarre, for example you can imply the guy has more children that are this guy's siblings or that guy is the coma guy's actual dad and he's somehow never told him that. You can also make the punchline stronger by lightly sprinkling in some subtle foreshadowing, like almost calling him son accidentally or the guy questioning why this is the first person to see him after a comma. Another aspect there potential for improvement in is just some light music to set the tone or emphasize jokes, it can also make silence itself a bigger punchline. Next up are more subjective suggestions: Make the characters weird. There's an inherent absurdity in a guy waking up from a coma and the first thing he's talking about is what happened to his favorite football team, make the guys weirdos and poke fun at that. For example, you can make the dynamic more fun by having one of the guys trying to ask/explain what happened with the rest of his life and the other one just refuses to talk about anything other than Newcastle. Another thing is dialogue flow, I know it's a bit harder to edit, when it's one person talking to themselves, but if you have characters interrupt and talk over each other and going on small irrelevant tangents or getting distracted, you can really sell the illusion that it's two different people. Last thing, you could build up a shared universe and subtly (or quickly) reference past videos. Is there a person running around putting football fanatics in comas? Are they all waking up at the same time? Is this the same guy explaining everything to all the coma patients? Do they know each other? You can play around with that. Take everything I've said with a grain of salt and bear in mind I actually still enjoy this, but I'm just sharing some (hopefully) constructive criticism.

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